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Re: To Be Weak [EDITED]
Alright, This is decent. I like the vividity in the description; it creates good tension. However, there were a few awkward sentences Never had I ever felt being with someone ...
Dec 15, 2008
Alright, This is decent. I like the vividity in the description; it creates good tension. However, there were a few awkward sentences Never had I ever felt being with someone ...
Dec 15, 2008
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